“For today’s prompt, I want you to write a poem involving miscommunication. It can be miscommunication between two people or misinterpretation of some sort. I will leave it up to you guys to deal with it however you want.”
Only four more days… Only four more days…
.
.
Untitled
.
Does he hear my words when I speak?
I ask him, what kind of books are they,
and he tells me what they cost.
I ask him, what did the picture look like,
and he tells me it came from Aunt Suzie.
I ask him, which kind of file attachment was it,
and he tells me who sent it to him.
Does he hear my words when I speak?
Is my meaning lost in the space between us,
or does he deliberately misunderstand?
Every day, I question: is this
perversity or senility?
And still, I wonder.






1 comment
Comments feed for this article
April 26, 2009 at 2:17 pm
lizziedripping
Hi I used to scibble bits of poetry at school, a very long time ago;
This is my first attempt in years and please forgive it’s simplicity i just thought it would be fun to share.
His secret
We sit at opposite ends of the couch
He asks if I would like some wine
I think that I would like to talk
But my tongue says yes, that would be fine
When did we stop telling the truth
Keeping all our thoughts inside
He says he had to stay at work
But I know that his mouth has lied
We have grown so far apart
That closeness we once had I miss
His promise of eternal love
Betrayed by a stolen lingering kiss
How long can I keep up this lie
Pretend that I don’t know her name
His heart has left the home we made
Our life will never be the same
But I am weak and so afraid
I cannot voice my greatest fears
That she has taken all his heart
And all that’s left to me are tears
And so I smile and drink my wine
Talk of matters bland and trite
We go upstairs when it grows late
And without passion, kiss goodnight.